Joined: May 1, 2017
Jackson Likes: 18 Songs
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Down That Road
Nice song, especially like the piano outro… the rest reminds me that I, too, often do what is expected, not where I really want to go. Allow yourself to be who you are before you become a part of the Machine. You’ll have plenty of time to conform later.
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Grind
Brent, I did follow your advice on a positive grind in another lyric. It goes like this: Blessed I’m done and I haven’t done a thing today. Came to work, didn’t come to play, But somehow it didn’t turn that way, And now I’m scrambling... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Tangled Up With You
Hey Gregg, A pretty good song! Like it a lot. I agree with Brent just because I personally like things a bit more complicated and ambiguous, even though the genre seems to discourage that. Again, I like your work. Keep writing! Jack
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Two Cents
Amber, Love and marriage are different and, often, unrelated, though people often tend to think of them as a natural progression. In my opinion/experience, Love is primeval, physical, almost non-verbal, especially early on in life. Marriage is much more contrived (to the point that in some cultures parents make... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on MY LOVE
Hey Corey, I like the tune quite a bit, it is pretty and very easy on the ear. Lyrics are another matter; in my opinion they can get much better if you get rid of the most obvious cliches and add some fresh images, something personal/specific you two share... Read More