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May 26, 2017

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on The Lighthouse Keeper

Hey Jeffrey, thanks very much. I like the voice too, but it’s not mine. Philip, My interest in writing commercial songs is not very high. I much prefer writing songs that affect people and mess with their hearts and minds. I am taking myself seriously, as you can see,... Read More

May 25, 2017

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on The Lighthouse Keeper

Hey Philip, You are spot on, man, I could not agree with you more. I am unhappy with the structure and the arrangement too. Unfortunately I did not get any help with either and learned my lesson the hard way. This is only my 2nd demo! Lyric needs some touch... Read More

May 24, 2017

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Antidote

It’s a beautiful song, and a great demo. Not familiar with the strictly pop environment, but thinking a good cut for Lady Antebellum, who seem to operate seamlessly in the country pop area.

May 14, 2017

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Hard Act to Follow

Richard, I like your song. I ‘hear’ a Birds/Eagles vibe with a 12-string and lush harmonies in a studio production. There are small things in the lyric, as Philip mentions, you may have to clean up, but for me the overall feel is there and I like it. Be... Read More

May 12, 2017

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Grind

Hey Corey, I am very grateful for your feedback, man! Really appreciate it a lot. To your points: You are right, mixing 1st, 2nd and 3rd person can be confusing, and I have done it a lot, and have been extra careful to fix it in editing. Grind is all ... Read More

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