Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Hypnotized

Amber… I had a thought for this one… if you’re interested. What if you shifted the focus from your guy being “hypnotized” by his phone to you becoming “invisible” to him?  The phone is just one of the reasons.  He’d rather watch the game then spend... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Lipstick Red MBZ

Hi Kris!  Welcome to Frettie! This sounds like a fun, bouncy song, but would love to see the lyrics rather than trying to figure them out.  If you login and choose the song, you can add the lyrics under “edit song details”, then copy and paste them in. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on I KNOW YOUR LIFE

Corey, I wanted to comment just on the lyrics, as I haven’t listened to the music. I’ve seen several songs along this theme, and the first question everybody always asks is “who’s going to sing it?”.  By that, I mean unless an artist has actually lived... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Hypnotized

Hey Amber!  Glad to see you’re still working on this one.  Personally, I think I like the feel and vibe of the music in your first version better, but that’s just me. Since you’ve gone to shorter and choppier lyrics, you have to paint mental... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on "COWBOYS ARE STRANGE CATS"

Oh, forgot to mention, in V2, the phrase “from a fight don’t run” isn’t natural and sounds awkward.  Something like “start a fight, they won’t run” or “they always walk, they don’t run” feels like it flows better. Phillip