ITS ABOUT SOMEONE WHO IS GOING THROUGH ROUGH TIMES AND I CAN RELATE
PLEASE PROVIDE ANY FEEDBACK
Hi Phillip
Thank you so much for your feedback. You are probably right in everything that you said. I cannot grow
As a songwriter without honest and truthful. Again thanks for
The feedback
Corey B
July 07, 2017
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I KNOW YOUR LIFE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE (YEAH MAN)
IVE BEEN THERE ONCE OR TWICE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE (YEA MAN) FOLLOWING BAD ADVICE
LIVING IN THE BACK SEAT OF A RUSTY OLD CAR
TRYING TO LIVE DREAM AND GETTING NO WHERE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE I KNOW YOUR LIFE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE (YEA) YOUR WORKIN ON ANOTHER WIFE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE (YEA MAN) TRYING TO SATISFY
BILLS PILLING UP CANT GET NO SLEEP AT NIGHT
PUSHING ON TO LIVE THAT DREAM
OOOOO IVE BEEN THERE ONCE OR TWICE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE
I KNOW YOUR LIFE YEA MAN WORKING LATE AT NIGHT
I KNOW YOUR LIFE PAYING FOR YOUR EX WIFE
WATCHING THAT CLOCK WANTING TO BE DONE
HANG ON THERE MAN YOUR TIME WILL COME
I KNOW YOUR LIFE I KNOW YOUR LIFE
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Corey, I wanted to comment just on the lyrics, as I haven’t listened to the music.
I’ve seen several songs along this theme, and the first question everybody always asks is “who’s going to sing it?”. By that, I mean unless an artist has actually lived in their car, paying alimony to an ex wife while working on another wife, what artist can connect with the song and make it believable? Something to think about.
Lyric wise, what kind of bills does somebody living in their car have? Is a woman really going to marry a guy living in a car?
Not trying to be mean or nasty, just things that jump out to me in the lyrics.
Phillip
July 07, 2017
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Hi Phillip
Thank you so much for your feedback. You are probably right in everything that you said. I cannot grow
As a songwriter without honest and truthful. Again thanks for
The feedback
Corey B
July 07, 2017
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Phillip Lemmonds
Corey, I wanted to comment just on the lyrics, as I haven’t listened to the music.
I’ve seen several songs along this theme, and the first question everybody always asks is “who’s going to sing it?”. By that, I mean unless an artist has actually lived in their car, paying alimony to an ex wife while working on another wife, what artist can connect with the song and make it believable? Something to think about.
Lyric wise, what kind of bills does somebody living in their car have? Is a woman really going to marry a guy living in a car?
Not trying to be mean or nasty, just things that jump out to me in the lyrics.
Phillip
July 07, 2017