Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on SHES A BEAUTY

Corey, I’m impressed that you can sit down and write a song in one sitting.  I might get a chorus and a verse at one sitting, but think that’s the most I’ve ever written at one time. I know you sang a few different words than... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Low Country High

Keith, this is a nice song.  Not sure there’s an audience for it outside the “low country”, but bet if you play it locally, it gets a great response.  Definitely got that laid back feel to it.  Nothing really jumps out at me lyric or music... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Are You Listening?

Brent, thank you for your thoughts and ideas. I had written these lyrics over a year ago as an experiment in the VVBV format.  I usually have a melody and music going through my head as I’m writing, but on this one, I kept finding myself singing to... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Lipstick Red MBZ

Okay… I dig it.  It has a nice bouncy melody and sounds a little different than what’s currently playing on the radio.  It’s got that “Carrie” kind of vibe to it, but feel it needs a few tweaks here and there. Your syllable count in the... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Here’s The Thing

Keith, I know this song is personal to you, but here are some random thoughts. I think you’re putting too many ideas into the song.  You’ve got 8 lines for the homesite, then 8 lines on the kids.  At this point, I’m still not sure what the... Read More