Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on That Smile

When I first listened, I wasn’t keen on the triplet “when I see that smile”, but the more I listen to it, it’s kind of grown on me.  Would love to see the lyric sheet.  You can add it by logging in, going to the song,... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Sister of the Girl Next Door

Guys, maybe it’s just me, but I don’t get the “sister” connection.  Don’t get me wrong, “sister of the girl next door” rolls off the tongue easily and sounds good, but from a lyric perspective, I don’t get it.  Their not related, not sorority... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on The Sweetest

Amber, I am interested on your take for the “drag my tongue” line.  Do you feel it’s too much, doesn’t fit the song, degrading in some manner?  I’d bet we’ve all done it at some point.  We were trying to write to push... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on I Didn't Know

Amber… the 1st verse isn’t easy to follow. Easier to follow like this: You text me, say you’re coming over I should look out my window You left flowers on my Rover Who is saying “love that feeling”, you or him? Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on SHES A BEAUTY

I never try to be mean or nasty to anyone… it’s just in my nature to say what I think… which has gotten me into trouble a time or two.  Unfortunately, on the internet you can’t hear the inflection of how something is said or see the... Read More