REMAKE ITS A SONG ABOUT ADDICTION AND BREAK UP
ANY FEED BACK IS WELCOME FIRST SONG IVE DONE IN QUIT A WHILE SO LET ME HAVE IT
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Woke up with an acking head
walked out on the porch you said
its the last time you ever gonna do this
what you did last night was wrong
should have stop when i said
it was time to go home but you didnt
add a shot of whiskey to the brain
cause my beer ears just dont hear you
and my whiskey mind dont understand
my tequila sense tells me different
hope Jack Daniels can explain
she said your sick you know
Im about at the end of my rope
while you were passed out drunk
pact my things loaded in the trunk Im leaving
add a shot of whiskey to the brain
cause my beer ears just dont hear you
and my whiskey mind dont care
my tequila sense tells me different
hope wild turkey will still be there
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Hey, Corey- thanks for sharing your song! I like that the song has some tempo / groove to it. I won’t get much into the lyric because you didn’t post it… but it’s an interesting title, and that’s always a great place to start!
July 09, 2019
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Brent Baxter
Hey, Corey- thanks for sharing your song! I like that the song has some tempo / groove to it. I won’t get much into the lyric because you didn’t post it… but it’s an interesting title, and that’s always a great place to start!
July 09, 2019
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