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GONE

Corey Bourque

May 09, 2017

Genre: Pop

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ITS ABOUT A GIRL FED UP WITH HER MAN BEING GONE

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Amber Lewis

I really like the first two verses. How she seems she is bothered that she just completely disconnects, and focuses on the beauty in nature/world to try and get her mind clear. what is it that this guy did to make her feel this way? why did he leave, what were things like when they were together, and what made them change?

July 07, 2017

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Your Gone
BY Cooriokhen z Bourque

She was sitting underneath the trees staring at the leaves
wondering if they would turn brown

She had a cell phone in her hand and a lap top by her side
neither one was on

she could hear that horn blowing down the road and she wonders
if hes home

it don't matter anyway in her mind hes gone

Chorus:
Hes gone and left her alone
Hes gone far away from home
hes gone and shes all alome
and she just cant seem
to hang on

istrumental

he was standing in the airport waiting for his bags
so pulled out his phone

there were no messages and no missed calls no voice mails at all
so he connected to his home page and read what he saw
and it cut him to the bone

She Wrote

Chorus:
your gone far away from home
your gone and left me alone
your gone in my mind your gone
and I judt cant keep hanging on
ending
Your gone in my mind your gone
your gone and left me to long
your gone in my mind your gone

© 2015 Cooriokhen Bourque

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Amber Lewis

I really like the first two verses. How she seems she is bothered that she just completely disconnects, and focuses on the beauty in nature/world to try and get her mind clear. what is it that this guy did to make her feel this way? why did he leave, what were things like when they were together, and what made them change?

July 07, 2017


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