Done with the mindset...We all have secrets!
LOVE THIS GREAT Song——I wrote one Called ““SECRIT SIN “” that got a cut on a gossip CD went know were a few back sliders bought mine ha ha——here some why—-You may go to church shout and yell amen but god knows what you have been doing he knows were you have been I am here to Testify there aint NO SECRIT Sin——ANY WAYS LOVE YOUE SONG GREAT JOB GOOD LUCK -BOBBY
January 11, 2019
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Hey, Bobby! Thanks for sharing this with us. I like the vibe, and the 1st line draws me in. After all, who doesn’t like a deep dark secret? Nice change into the chorus.
Hooky.
Part of me wants at least SOME context or clues as to what the secret might be. Is it about a girl? Did he hook up with someone who was taken? Or… whatever? That kinda frustrates me. But it feels real good sonically and melodically. And since it’s a pop song, not a country song, I can let it go. ha!
I dig it. Good work.
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January 11, 2019
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LOVE THIS GREAT Song——I wrote one Called ““SECRIT SIN “” that got a cut on a gossip CD went know were a few back sliders bought mine ha ha——here some why—-You may go to church shout and yell amen but god knows what you have been doing he knows were you have been I am here to Testify there aint NO SECRIT Sin——ANY WAYS LOVE YOUE SONG GREAT JOB GOOD LUCK -BOBBY
January 11, 2019
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Hey, Bobby! Thanks for sharing this with us. I like the vibe, and the 1st line draws me in. After all, who doesn’t like a deep dark secret? Nice change into the chorus.
Hooky.
Part of me wants at least SOME context or clues as to what the secret might be. Is it about a girl? Did he hook up with someone who was taken? Or… whatever? That kinda frustrates me. But it feels real good sonically and melodically. And since it’s a pop song, not a country song, I can let it go. ha!
I dig it. Good work.
Hope that helps! Please take a moment to leave a comment on another writer’s song. It doesn’t have to be super-detailed or anything. Just a thought or two about the song. (Also, the best way to GET feedback is to GIVE feedback.) Thanks!
January 11, 2019
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