The agony of love
I like this song. Love your vocals. Very cool. Looking back at prior comments, maybe Change up the drum track. What you have works for some parts of the song. But I get if you are like me guitar and melody are what matter…I don’t like taking time working out drum parts but I did a pitch to BMG who wanted to hear drums more in the background. But I can hear through all that and love your song style and vocals.
April 21, 2018
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Agree with both Randy & Haydee. The drums are to loud in this track. Distracting…yes. Guess after you listen to it 200 times you tend to overlook stuff. That is why feedback is important. Thank you both again.
April 21, 2018
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Nice song, Bobby. I think the drums may sound a little overpowering because there isn’t a bass guitar connecting the guitar and drums. If you add a bass and boost that up a bit, maybe it would sound a little different. Just some thoughts.
April 25, 2018
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Hi Bobby, you are a talented singer that’s for sure.
I think it is a nice melody and with a little bit more efforts regarding production, this could be a nice tune. I like your chorus, the verses need some better imagery. The theme or ‘big idea’ of the song is quite popular and to stay out you have to work very hard on original imagery, otherwise you will not grab your listeners attention.
April 29, 2018
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A lot of great things going on here. The thick beat is too distracting. That needs to be taken off. The lyrics needs a bit of refinement, but overall, great concept and good sound.
April 21, 2018
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I like this song. Love your vocals. Very cool. Looking back at prior comments, maybe Change up the drum track. What you have works for some parts of the song. But I get if you are like me guitar and melody are what matter…I don’t like taking time working out drum parts but I did a pitch to BMG who wanted to hear drums more in the background. But I can hear through all that and love your song style and vocals.
April 21, 2018
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Agree with both Randy & Haydee. The drums are to loud in this track. Distracting…yes. Guess after you listen to it 200 times you tend to overlook stuff. That is why feedback is important. Thank you both again.
April 21, 2018
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Nice song, Bobby. I think the drums may sound a little overpowering because there isn’t a bass guitar connecting the guitar and drums. If you add a bass and boost that up a bit, maybe it would sound a little different. Just some thoughts.
April 25, 2018
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Hi Bobby, you are a talented singer that’s for sure.
I think it is a nice melody and with a little bit more efforts regarding production, this could be a nice tune. I like your chorus, the verses need some better imagery. The theme or ‘big idea’ of the song is quite popular and to stay out you have to work very hard on original imagery, otherwise you will not grab your listeners attention.
April 29, 2018
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Haydee Ahrens
A lot of great things going on here. The thick beat is too distracting. That needs to be taken off. The lyrics needs a bit of refinement, but overall, great concept and good sound.
April 21, 2018
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