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John Shoemaker

July 29, 2019

John Shoemaker gave feedback on I’m So Over You

Some funny vibes here. I would probably only use the “I’m/she"ll get over you” on the last line of the chorus rather than all four. You’ve got the basic idea down and now I think lyrically it could use some fine tuning. I’d encourage you... Read More

July 29, 2019

John Shoemaker gave feedback on My Angel - guitar vocal

The essence of the song is very beuatiful. However, I think that musically it lags a bit. I’d like you to spice it up by adding a pre chorus and definitely a bridge as well. I also like the idea of shortening the chorus and the verses possibly as... Read More

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