Brent Baxter gave feedback on Boulevard Of Broken Dreams

Hey, Tony!  Thanks for sharing with us.  You haven’t posted the lyrics yet, so I’m not able to really dive in.  I don’t listen to much jazz, so the feel is fun and fresh for me.  Some good imagery in the 1st verse-... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Don't You Ever Change

Hi, Barry!  Thanks for sharing this song with us.  It’s a pretty melody- especially the melody on the title- it really hooks it. However, the 2nd line seems a little insulting to her.  She didn’t have a clue?  How would it feel if someone... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Without You

Hi, Kevin!  Thanks for sharing this with us.  Man, I really wish you’d include your lyrics to your songs- it would make it so much easier for me to dig in and give feedback.  But here goes, anyway. I like the “coin that won’t get... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Tell Me Why

Hi, Archie!  Thanks for sharing this with us!  I like that it’s tempo- old school shuffle thing.  Fun.  Retro. Speaking of retro, I dig that you can get away with saying “cell-a-phone.” Normally, that would feel ALL kinds of wrong.  But here, in the... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Hits Like Whiskey

Hi, Jason!  Welcome to Frettie, and thank you for sharing your song with us!  I agree with Chad about the redundant 1st line. Yeah, it’s good, but it’s not great.  I think the biggest hurdle this song has to overcome is just the idea. ... Read More