Brent Baxter gave feedback on Trials and Tribulations

Hi, David!  Thanks for sharing this with us. I like the hopeful message of the song, but I’d really like to see some specifics or imagery in the song.  There are some nice metaphorical images (spider chains), but I’m really having to fill in all the... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on In The Meantime

Hey, Ronnie!  Good to see you back on here.  Thanks for sharing this with us. I could use a little more emotional focus in the song.  Most of the chorus seems like you’ll just have a good time while she’s gone.  Or you might... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Story of this woman this man

Hi, Kevin!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  Now, I’m not sure what your goal for this song or your songwriting is in general, but I have a few thoughts. Commercially speaking, you’re putting your song in a tough spot by making the singer be... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Fixing You

Hi, Kay!  Thanks for sharing this song with us! I like the idea of the song- and that you don’t put such a heartbreaking idea in a slow ballad.  It’s a wise commercial move to put some tempo on it. Could you say, “it’s breaking... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Another Somebody

Hi, Andrea!  Thanks for sharing your song with us!  Here are just a few thoughts… I think I like the idea, though it’s a little foggy for me.  Sounds like you want to be your true self with your future lover.  But there’s some... Read More