Brent Baxter gave feedback on It Won't Stop

Hey, Donna!  Welcome to Frettie!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I agree with Phillip about adding your lyrics- it’ll help folks give helpful feedback.  For myself, the lyrics didn’t reach out and grab me as much as I wanted them to.  I think... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on No Place For A Hero

Hey, Keith- thanks for sharing! You do a good job describing the vet- especially the fatigues “pinned up around his knees.” Personally, it’s a little preachy for me.  Now, I don’t have a problem with your point.  I’d rather be moved in the heart, but... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Grande Ave Blues

Hey, Keith- thanks for sharing!  Okay, I dig the intro.  That’s cool.  The imagery immediately pulls me in. Cool groove.  Blues isn’t really my area, so I’ll stop there.  I dig it.  Nice work! Please pay this forward by leaving a... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on why do i cry [Being Small]

Hey, Corey- thanks for sharing your song!  I like that you’re biting off a big idea- a deeper thought. I think you’re a step or two too removed.  Don’t tell me about what you think about kids.  Show me the kids.  Show me... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Here’s The Thing

Hey, Keith- thanks for sharing your song!  I love how you put me in the scene with all the imagery. Also dig the easy rolling country feel. I realize it’s an auto-biography song, so I’m not looking at it as a “pitch” song.  That being said,... Read More