Brent Baxter gave feedback on Look At the Love We’re In (new mix)

Hey, Marvin!  Thanks for sharing another one with us!  I can see why this song has gotten some interest.  Good demo, good message, good writing!

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Bad Love Pain

Hey, Ray- thanks for sharing your work with us!  I agree with Corey- nice vibe.  I like how you hammer that hook in the chorus and bring it back around at the end of the chorus. It’s lyrically a little different (in a good way) and interesting.... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on BEER EARS WHISKEY MIND

Hey, Corey- thanks for sharing your song!  I like that the song has some tempo / groove to it.  I won’t get much into the lyric because you didn’t post it… but it’s an interesting title, and that’s always a great place to start!

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Oh California

Thanks for sharing your song with us, Howard! I think one thing that can “up” the emotion of the song is making her leaving more recent.  The 1st verse makes it clear that she left a while back.  I’d make the wound more fresh. Just a thought.... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Don't Feel The Rain (acoustic)

Hey, Marvin- thanks for sharing! Some good stuff here.  I like the thought of the 1st 2 verses, but the 3rd verse raises more questions than it answers.  Is the boy dying outside?  Why?  I’m too busy THINKING about that to FEEL the emotion of the... Read More