Brent Baxter gave feedback on Tainted Dreams (New Version)

Hey, Carlos!  Thanks for sharing your song with the Frettie community! The demo sounds good.  I like much of the melody, too.  I’ll tell ya, though… your chorus kinda feels more like a pre-chorus or channel.  I was waiting for it to really hit the “... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Cheap Motel

Hey, Michael- thanks for sharing!  Congrats on the contest placement. There’s some great imagery here.  You definitely set the mood and scene.  (Hair in the drain, beer can ashtray, etc.)  Well done! Now, it’s a folk song, so it may not need as much... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Just To Be With You

Hey, Robin!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  You mentioned in your description that the song is “young love in the 60’s” and it definitely has that 60’s throwback feel to it. I like that the story has a clear beginning middle and end.  It has... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Between A Rock And A Hard Place

Thanks for sharing this!  I dig the groove.  I like that it has groove and is positive.  One thing I noticed: in the chorus you rhyme “place” and “space.”  Then you do it again in the 1st verse.  Try to keep your rhymes different throughout... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Longneck

Thanks for the feedback, ya’ll!