Brent Baxter gave feedback on Radio Head

Hey, Marcus!  Good to hear another song from ya.  As far as who could cut this song… Radiohead suddenly comes to mind for some reason.  Huh. Really, though, I dig the title.  I like the vibe.  To me, it has some throwback 80’s pop to... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Shine (Don't Hide Your Light)

Hey, Marcus!  Thanks for sharing.  I like the musical groove.  I like the idea.  It feels kinda retro/theater- I’m not sure who in comtemporary gospel/ Christian music could cut it.  But I’m certainly no expert.  I’d be curious to hear... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on A Hard Act to Follow

Hey, Richard!  Thanks for sharing.  Nice image to start the song.  The title has a big melodic spotlight on it, so I know the title even without seeing the lyric- well done. In the 2nd verse, do we even need to go to the negative ending to... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Getting By

Hey, Robin- thanks for sharing.  I like the feel and general idea of the song.  The only thing I’d challenge you to do is to add more imagery to your lyric.  How can you say some of these things - with imagery?  Like, could you... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Bummer

Hey, Robin!  Thanks for sharing.  Funny- really liked the line about the black cat and the ladder.  Good stuff.  It’s silly, but it’s fun.  Please pay it forward by leaving a comment on another writer’s song.  Thanks!