Dennis Field gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Benny, I am a big fan of your story telling. Nice job all around in my opinion. As far the title goes.. I actually don’t mind it. This song takes on the “Mr. Bojangles’ type of feel to me. So the the unique title is kind of fitting. Also,... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on The Tide

Welcome to Frettie! Thanks for sharing this. I really like that pause….. before you sing “The Tide” Really nice and it acts like a nice intro to the whole story. Immediately makes me want to hear more. I enjoy the melody and background vocals. The break/pause after the second... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Titanic

Greg, Welcome to Frettie! I enjoyed this very much. The nice solo break was perfect for breaking this song up. Songs like this can feel long, but you did a nice job with all the subtle riffs. Even so, I think you could probably nix a verse and it would... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Tight Squeeze

Kirk, Welcome to Frettie! This song has some great lines. I was immediately pulled into the song. The music combined with the lyrics and singing feel perfect together. The whole song takes me from scene to scene really nicely! I actually can see a “detective” dropping a coin in a... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Sentimental Way

Benny, Welcome to Frettie. First off. I really like your “sound”. It’s perfect for story telling. The guitar and background music fit really nice with this song. Like Matt, I would like to see a stronger change in melody for “I don’t wonder where she is..” It will... Read More