Joined: June 2, 2013
Dennis Likes: 284 Songs
Dennis Field gave feedback on Recently Unmarried Man
Benny, The change from “nuts”, to “butt” would soften it that part of it for sure, would be nice in those settings where you need to soften it. I shared this with my brother, and he got a nice kick out of it.
Dennis Field gave feedback on It's Raining Sunshine (demo)
Mary, As always, I really enjoy your story telling. Always well written. I can see this with a contemporary feel to it for sure. I don’t know why, but I could see this having a Carry Underwood feel to it. The chorus is really nice. It’s raining sunshine... Read More
Dennis Field gave feedback on If I Only Knew Then
Benny, Thanks for the feedback and contribution to my song. Would love to try that out. Out of many of the songs I have “written” I really get drawn to this one, so I’m looking forward to getting a revised version up.
Dennis Field gave feedback on Recently Unmarried Man
Benny, This was a really neat song to follow along with the lyrics to. It reminded me of some of the older stuff from David Allen Coe. He had a number of these types of songs like this where he just said it. I think it could use some tightening... Read More
Dennis Field gave feedback on A Good Ole Boy Like Me
Benny, The idea I am trying to show is exactly what you said “God watches out for the good ole boys too. I’m trying to find that balance, that doesn’t put God in bad light, but that because of him, the good ole boy can live on the... Read More