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March 21, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Marry You

Very beautiful voice and good accompaniment. I’ll have to listen a few more times to find something to criticize… Good work!

March 19, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Boys vs. Girls

I think if you were to turn down the reverb/delay on the vocals a little bit, the lyrics would be much easier to understand. I had a hard time getting a feel for the song since I wasn’t entirely sure what was being said a lot of the... Read More

March 19, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Suffocator (revised)

Vocals sound great -  very smooth. I found the accompanying melody a bit bland, however. I don’t think there was enough in the musical side of this song to keep me listening after a first swipe. It’s not that it’s a boring song - the melody... Read More

March 19, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Western Sun

Hey Emily, I like the melody you’ve set up with your voice. The volume of your guitar kind of hinders my ability to hear the lyrics very well, though. I think you could achieve so much more motion in this song if you play with dynamics a little bit.... Read More

March 17, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Girl’s Trip

Hey Nancy, I wish you had some lyrics to accompany this too. I could definitely see someone like Susan Tedeschi singing over this. One thing I would adjust/remove is that saxophone(?) riff you have jumping in. I’ve always been weary of adding software-woodwinds/brass. There just isn’t... Read More

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