This is my first Christmas story attempt. It tells a sweet story that brings the real birth of Jesus to a place a child can undertsand. I told my sons a similar story when they were little because they would try to understand Santa coming but then in church we speak about the birth of our Saviour. I think this tells a simple story to merge the two ideas.
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" On That Day" by: Kathy Kay Wallace
V1- Gather round children, by the firelight glow
I wanna tell you a secret, that nobody knows
It happened on the most holy of nights
When old St. Nick took his very first flight
V2- Up in the sky Santa saw a bright star
He wondered what drew him there from afar
Santa landed his sleigh 'neath a tall palm tree
When he got to the stable, he fell to his knees
CH- Yes, the real Christmas story took place in the sand
There was no snow falling in this far away land
A baby lay sleeping in a manger of hay
He was Born to save the whole world On that Day
V3- Santa smiled at the babe, and he bowed his old head
and he listened to what the three wisemen said
They said spread love to children everywhere
To honor the new King leave a gift for Him there
CH- Yes, the real Christmas story took place in the sand
There was no snow falling in this far away land
A baby lay sleeping in a manger of hay
He was born to save the world On that Day
BR- Our Savior must have been a sight to behold
Baby Jesus was a gift more precious than gold
Santa gave thanks he wiped a tear from his eye
then he returned to his sleigh and took to the sky
CH- Yes, the real Christmas story took place in the sand
There was no snow falling in this far away land
A baby lay sleeping in a manger of hay
He was born to save the world On that Day
He was born to save the world On That Day
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