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I wrote this song in the 70's and it has been Published with peer Southern about a guy/girl who wakes up to find his girl gone and then realizes it was only a dream
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Thanks for the response Frank, it’s actually just a chorus or a bridge and I agree I like that part also which I wrote much later than verses. The singer on it put a very nice harmony to it; her idea and I loved it so I kept it, But that is a nice idea. I just did it as a demo so if I found someone who might want to do it, they could do that twice
January 03, 2019
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I could def see this as a 70’s movie soundtrack… Simple and straightforward but sometimes that’s all you need!
April 04, 2019
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Thanks Vicky Interesting comment I wrote it in 1976,Now if I could just contact a movie producer LOL
May 02, 2019
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Hi Jo, the song has a strange structure, there is a very sweet and catchy part, but it appears only once. Is it a bridge or a chorus? Anyway this part would be a great chorus and should be repeated more often.
December 29, 2018
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Thanks for the response Frank, it’s actually just a chorus or a bridge and I agree I like that part also which I wrote much later than verses. The singer on it put a very nice harmony to it; her idea and I loved it so I kept it, But that is a nice idea. I just did it as a demo so if I found someone who might want to do it, they could do that twice
January 03, 2019
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I could def see this as a 70’s movie soundtrack… Simple and straightforward but sometimes that’s all you need!
April 04, 2019
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Thanks Vicky Interesting comment I wrote it in 1976,Now if I could just contact a movie producer LOL
May 02, 2019
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Jo, the song has a strange structure, there is a very sweet and catchy part, but it appears only once. Is it a bridge or a chorus? Anyway this part would be a great chorus and should be repeated more often.
December 29, 2018
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