This is another of those very short pieces that my Billy Bobbie character likes to refer to as his 'Nashville haikus'...
I know it's too short, but so are a lot of other things in life...
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Well I tried for a long time to write you a song
But the words wouldn't come
My tunes wouldn't hum
Woke up one morning and I seen you were gone
Still I tried for a long time to write you a song
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Frank Renfordt
Ha ha, so cool… three chords and the truth -that’s Country!
April 15, 2018
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