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October 04, 2019

Paul deMarco gave feedback on Here's To You (Wanda Moore Kielblock)

Really like this… great furniture in the detail… This may seem like a small thing but I felt that the first “here’s to you” should come down and intimate… Then the seconds pitch up a little… Then the final one hits high then come down like you do… Just... Read More

October 04, 2019

Paul deMarco gave feedback on Really Win Big

Thanks Brent we’ll look at that… I guess we’re always trying to keep the length… But maybe we can do that… Every chorus you think?

October 01, 2019

Paul deMarco gave feedback on Raining Again

Great job with that kick drum and love how you use guitars in place of keyboard arps My first thought was we’re told get a positive hook… But I think you’re trying to alter perceptions cos song feels happy and the rain is a positive thing I get... Read More

October 01, 2019

Paul deMarco gave feedback on Tired of Nashville

This reminded me of Jessie ( I think by Joshua Kadison) Like it Piano is good and tender that fits the lyric (well written btw) I’m not sure if you recorded this yourself or not but you’d really benefit from a better drum plug-in it would really enhance a... Read More

October 01, 2019

Paul deMarco gave feedback on Long Time Comin'

Love the Bad English vibe to this (one of my favourite bands) Dan Huff would dig this Great demo One night years of fading faces.. some great lyrics here I wonder if there was scope in the bridge/solo for a cool modulation in the changes… Great song really well... Read More

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