Corey Bourque gave feedback on I would forgive you(concept)

I like the feel and the message you are sending The only thing I would add to what Brent comment Is try taking out some of the shorter connecting Words. In some spots it seems a little rushed It might add better feel to the flow

Corey Bourque gave feedback on Heart Less You

Great job with this one

Corey Bourque gave feedback on Song on the Radio

Catchy tune Paul got that old Motown Feel but sounds current. To me it sounds like You and you’re should be in there instead her she The song holds its own just as written I like it Corey

Corey Bourque gave feedback on My One And Only

I like band in the box it’s come a long way Wish I would have known about it back then Fun song

Corey Bourque gave feedback on DANCING ON THE PIER

Thank you Carla Dancey