Brent Baxter gave feedback on Lettin' Go

Hi, Marvin- thanks for sharing this song with us.  Sad song, but it feels good, if you know what I mean.  Good melodic work.  Solid song.  I hope writing it has helped you let go of somethings you were never meant to carry.

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Another One To Hate

Hi, Haydee- thanks for sharing your song with us!  I wish the chorus had more clarity.  “Nowhere, but somewhere safe” feels like you mean it as a positive statement, even though (from your explanation) I know it’s just a defense mechanism and not a positive one. ... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on No Trespassing

Hi, Marie!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  (Wish I had the lyrics so I could dive in more deeply.) It has a nice retro-country vibe to it.  Lyrically and melodically, it feels like I’ve tuned into a classic country station.  I like that... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on No Maybe’s Baby

Hey, Tony!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I like that you’re writing positive/love/me-you/midtempos.  That’s commercially smart. However, I’d watch the cliche rhymes like “you/true” in the 1st line.  You really want to grab the listener with something fresh- especially... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Take What You Need

Hi, Evan!  Welcome to Frettie!  Thanks for sharing your music with us.  I like how you start off with a clear, intriguing image about the kitchen light. However, with her going to bed alone each night and making the coffee every morning… she’s pretty sympathetic- moreso... Read More