Joined: November 19, 2014
Brent Likes: 10 Songs
Brent Baxter gave feedback on Hella Good Time
Hey, Kevin! Thanks for posting. I see what’s been said about POV, and I agree totally that you want to pick a POV and stick with it. However, I see that you do transition in the PC with “So I said.” So it makes sense.... Read More
Brent Baxter gave feedback on A Girl That I Used To Know (G. Irwin, D. Branch, M. Leach, J. Withenshaw)
Hey, George! Thanks for sharing your song! There’s a lot of good stuff going on. You’re definitely paying attention to current, commercial country. Cool phrasing, positive-love-tempo/groove. When it comes to the title, if I weren’t looking at the lyric, I’d want... Read More
Brent Baxter gave feedback on Your Heart Hit Me
Hi, Sean! Thanks for posting! I like the subtle internal rhyme in V1 of Barcelona and California. I also like the phrase “Mustang bullet.” Nice. Good use of imagery. It’s also positive love in the first person, which is spot-on, commercially. I think you have an... Read More
Brent Baxter gave feedback on Blind Vision (Demo)
Hey, Noel! There’s a lot of good stuff going on here- thanks for posting. I dig the feel and melody. I like that you’re writing about something with depth, and you’ve make it catchy! Good job! For me, though, the lyric is a little too abstract. I... Read More