Brent Baxter gave feedback on I've Got a Problem

Hey, Katie!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I like the idea of the song, and I like the title. What if you start off verse 1 with “I’ve got a problem, one with deep blue eyes…” and describe what sounds like a handsome boy and NOT a problem.... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Two Poles Apart

Hey, Ross- thanks for sharing your song.  Wow- that’s a tough subject matter.  Not having personal experience with the topic, I’ll have a (limited) outsider’s perspective.  But here goes… I think the main thing for me is I want more showing than telling. ... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on concrete or sand

Hey, Richard!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I like the title - it makes me want to know what your song is about. I understand your dilemma about wanting to make it certain that it’s concrete.  Hmmm… How about “this house that we’re building will... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Kissable or I Didn't Know

Hey, Amber!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I like the idea of the song.  I’d think about switching the 1st and 2nd verses.  Putting the “face turns red” “hot mess” stuff first will make your chorus hit harder ‘cuz you’ve set up why you... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Take Away

Hi, Bob!  Welcome to Frettie!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  Just a note to help you get more (and more helpful) reviews: upload your lyrics. That being said… I’m a little confused.  You said “take away the skies, etc. and I’d have... Read More