Brent Baxter gave feedback on Fine Wine

Hey, David!  Good to see you back on Frettie- I see it’s been a while.  Cool song!  Now, it’s more singer/songwriter country than top 40 country (and I don’t mean that as a bad thing). It’s just lacking the clarity that a lot... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Like Juliet

Hey, Linne!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I dig the vibe and the idea.  It feels honest and emotional.  I dig it.  I don’t mind the “death” in the chorus.  It’s not morbid, but it’s on-theme.  Fits well. ... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on nothing to share

Hi, Barry!  Thanks for sharing your song.  Cool idea for your song.  It’s terribly tragic.  And that leads me to a couple possible changes.  The melody feels maybe kinda melancholy, where I think it should feel really sad.  Your kids died, after all. ... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on I Can’t Wait (version 2)

Hey, David!  I like the driving (no pun intended) feel of the song.  I like that 1st line image.  Puts me in the movie right away. I’m missing some clarity.  There’s some vagueness in the lyric that makes it hard for me to connect... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on So I’ve Been Thinking

Hi, Sherri!  Thanks for sharing your song!  I really like the title.  It’s intriguing.  I think you have a good opportunity here to really paint some pictures that will draw the listener in.  For example, in the 1st verse (and this isn’t phrased... Read More