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February 06, 2014

Dennis Field gave feedback on Paper Heart

Julia, Nice job with this. Very talented for sure. I think it would be really enjoyable to follow along with the lyrics to this. It has a bunch of great little lines to it and I hope I’m catching them all!

February 04, 2014

Dennis Field gave feedback on Settle Down

Nice job! I can see the female vocals peeking in on this like you mentioned above. Your other changes are valid as well. Great use of “What if..” Also very catchy melody. Thanks for sharing!

February 04, 2014

Dennis Field gave feedback on The Music Tree

Benny, Great job as always telling the story. I actually really liked the spoken aspect to this. The way you speak the first “choirs” and sing it the second time is really nice. By singing it the second time it really makes the chorus stand out and tell the story... Read More

February 04, 2014

Dennis Field gave feedback on Calculating Views

I had a tough time understanding the story with this song. The description above helped, but I think listeners who may not have that on hand, could find it tough. My biggest bit of feedback is that I didn’t feel the “hook” to pull me into this like some... Read More

February 04, 2014

Dennis Field gave feedback on Coming Home (demo)

JT, Nice job. I think you hit the Hunter Hayes, flare perfectly. Case in point, I had this playing to give you feedback and Julie said, “Hey who’s this?  It sounds like Hunter Hayes”. I found this very catchy. The chorus sticks in my head. The melody is... Read More

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