Dennis Field gave feedback on Artificial Light

I was immediately drawn into this! Nice stuff. The intro followed by that long pause was really cool. Lots of things going on, but I think you did a great job with managing all of it. Good stuff for sure!

Dennis Field gave feedback on shaking hands

Emma, Nice start with this. I actually don’t mind the additional vocals coming in. It creates the feeling of other voices inside the head. Something, I think I could see either way, but It added some variety. I look forward to following along with this song.

Dennis Field gave feedback on Don't Give Up On Me Baby

I’d agree with Dan on this one too. The vocals distracted me some. Maybe increasing the tempo could also be nice and would also play up that train vibe. I do like the guitar for sure.

Dennis Field gave feedback on Somewhere To Go

I think you’re exactly right. The melody is not pulling me in enough. I look forward to hearing a revised version of this for sure.

Dennis Field gave feedback on Somewhere To Go

Very interesting perspective to play off of. I often think about what “legacy” I will leave behind when I go and who will turn up at my funeral. I think the concept is unique, but you could probably use some tightening up on the song as hole. I simply started... Read More