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August 05, 2013

Dennis Field gave feedback on Hotter

Elaine, I think this is the type of song that would really resonate with its intended audience and almost become an anthem of sorts. It is a fun conceptual song. Thanks for posting.

August 05, 2013

Dennis Field gave feedback on Almost

Elaine, What a voice! Thank you for sharing. This is a great song full of great lines. I love the line “Sometimes lonely leaves me along.” as well as the chorus. This song is very visual and I think you captured the moment when someone losses a loved one very... Read More

August 05, 2013

Dennis Field gave feedback on I Had a Dream

Todd, Thanks for the compliments on the site. We have a ton of great features we are working on right now. A way to mention other members is something that we are looking into. I also agree with removing a chorus and verse. Condensing this song would pull it together... Read More

July 31, 2013

Dennis Field gave feedback on Gone

Robert, Very interesting and what a unique topic to write about. I love the way this song sounds. It has the perfect sound to it. It feels reflective of someone’s life. The way you sing the open line and add the subtle pause to it. Really pulls me in. ... Read More

July 30, 2013

Dennis Field gave feedback on I Had a Dream

Todd, Rough Tracks are always welcome! As you stated I would also consider cutting a verse or two. I think it will focus the song more and keep me from wondering. The “I had a dream of you and me” does start to make me feel like I am falling... Read More

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