Joined: June 2, 2013
Dennis Likes: 284 Songs
Dennis Field gave feedback on Start Living
Don, Thank you for the feedback! The way you re-positioned the lyrics is a nice perspective. I like the the struggle is gives. I appreciate it! Glad you like the delivery.
Dennis Field gave feedback on Start Living
Thanks for the feedback Joey. Yes. I think I’m going to go back to the drawing board on this. A revolution on a road trip is an interesting perspective as well.
Dennis Field gave feedback on Start Living
Dick, Thanks for the great feedback. Very great point. You are correct and you said it better. The idea would be to illustrate that you can always be running and chasing, but sometimes we need to take time to relax. That perspective changes where I can take the song. I... Read More
Dennis Field gave feedback on Start Living
I added a bit more to this song tonight. I expanded on the second verse and started playing with a chorus. I welcome your thoughts.
Dennis Field gave feedback on AT THE CROSSROADS
Thanks for sharing it on Frettie! I would love to follow along with the Lyrics if you want to add them.